Prompt: Write an expository essay focus statement explaining why music is so important to human beings
- Sentence Stem: Music is important to human beings because….
Lao Zao said, "Music in the soul can be heard by the universe." Music is a language that everyone speaks and understands. Science has proven that listening to music can help relieve stress.
Prompt: Write an expository essay focus statement explaining why music is so important to human beings
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jose romero
2/1/2016 09:00:35 am
Music is important to human beings because it helps people relax and being in there own place in mind.they can release stress and every problem they have
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Mrs. Guillory
5/24/2023 11:42:35 pm
Jose, what is this? I think we need to work on some of this after school, can you get in contact with me to work on this, I think it would benefit you.
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初美彤
2/1/2016 09:01:16 am
I think the music is very important in my world there is no music, there is no joy, music can bring people a good mood, when people fully committed to music when give people a sense of immersive, Very wonderful, if not music, then my world would be dark
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Mrs. Guillory
2/1/2016 09:03:58 am
I understand what you're trying to say; however, please use the sentence stem when it's offered. It will help you to have a focus statement that makes sense and includes your reasons, which is what the majority of your essay is about.
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Mrs. Guillory
5/14/2023 09:25:27 pm
I must have been in a bad mood, this is absolutely fantastic! Keep up the great work! Amazing job!
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Mrs. Guillory
5/24/2023 11:44:36 pm
This is a false Mrs. Guillory, please see my after class so we can discuss ways to get better at this topic.
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